Orenchi ni Kita Onna Kishi to Inakagurashi Surukotoninatta Ken - Ch. 133 - Not Gonna Let This Get the Best of Me!

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The story is about building a farm and another world character interacting with town folk, I don't know why people still get mad when a story has a different structure, and even now it happen more things that the first 30 chapters which we had the long quarantine arc:
-Ban and the MC has been a slow burn plot. Ban seems to see the MC with better eyes thank to Uryu but want him to take the iniciative
-We have seen Ban mellowing about earth and even seen he started to show some affection about his fiancee(his reaction with Uryu and how in this arc he spit at hearing his name)
-Natsumi plot is almost finished , the dads are again together and with a children, and she doesn't even need kendo.
-Momo plot and Uryu show about both starting to stop being bad at relationship. She want always to wait but always has a excuse when they confese to her and Uryu is a pushover(that people forget is almost a creep that made the femc almost block him) .
-the main couple need to talk but talking with a pregnant girl that cry everytime the Talk appear is hard. And the MC has 3 other problem on his hand.
-mc's ex plot about her bf parents wanting her to quit her job is the only that has been ignored(because she is helping american and Louise).
-Keita becoming a whole farm man and probably getting the girl and inspiring the MC to Talk with femc about staying here.
I don't know ,the story has been focusing most of the cast and try to evolve them to be better person. I get people trying to act like Komi(a gag manga with a little plot) has filler, but this is clear the plot and subplot.
My problem is mostly having like 15 different character arcs and sideplots going on at a time. It feels chaotic and unfocused. There is a reason most stories focus on having only a couple of concurrent plots at a time.
 

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