Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen shite Yatta - Ch. 53.2

[Shinratenseikami]

The phone call was about "rough" stuff, not just "stuff". She's been getting raped over this past month of rom-com. But the festival meant too many people were going to be at the park, and the client/s wanted to "slap" her and the like. Based on the tone, it seems like the author doesn't think these developments are particularly serious and is entirely warranted.
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Just like the FL's actions have really degraded her character, this chapter has really not done the ML any favors. His indifference toward her seems a little too unempathetic. However, I do think it's at least partially because he doesn't know the full extent of what's happened. Still, none of these three characters have been particularly well-written, with the FL being very sullied by these events.

Spoiler: Future events

Supposedly he ends up beating up the pimp. So I'm imaging he finds out what's really happened and that causes him to show some emotion.

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I can't say its 100% rape, but more like forcing herself to do it, because of the blackmail. I'm still 100% sure she's only done HandJ and BlowJ for the past month since everything was done in a public restroom. That hotel room booking is probably the first time she's doing it with a client, though I'm not sure whether Kirigaya already had her way on her or not.

I still believe on my theory that she's only done HandJ and BlowJ that's why the author was too bold to add this prostitution on the story, because the author knew the readers would sigh of relief and forgive him if they found out she's still a virgin.

 

[jojoka]

I'm still not sure why i'm reading this trainwreck. It has a worse plotline than most hentai but without any of the actual erotic parts.

Cus it's funny

 

[thycondrius]

Thanks for your hard work!

 

[Juston]

Can we at least wrap up the thing with the Mc and the girl who drugged him first before we go into something else like god damn

 

[Shinratenseikami]

Pardon, but just what is it in that conversation that makes you think he hasn't been making her do the real deal? The fact that he said he didn't want to get caught and "making her do guys in a public restroom" would be bad? Pretty sure that's just about the change of venue due to the fact that there's a festival going on and lots of places are crowded. Thus, while they normally do whatever they want to her in a park restroom that's pretty much never used, the presence of huge crowds in the general area make it necessary to find a hotel, and a good one away from the crowds, thus the increase in cost. So no, I for one am not buying this "just handjobs and blowjobs" thing. All the more so with the way she looked and acted when she came out of that restroom, and the look of her clothes, wrinkled and buttoned wrong and with semen stains on the skirt... if the author really is going to try to say she's still a virgin then he's pushing it even more than most authors that pull that kind of BS. Also, if you know her other works, she's really not shy about having characters raped.

I will only believe that she already crossed the line by doing sexual intercourse with her costumers if she tell them her experience during that one month period of selling her body, but as long as no explanation are present here people can always assume that she's still a virgin.

Fyi as long as you have a pretty face and a good body proportion like Hanabi. If you're smart you can still earn tons of money without needing to do an actual sexual intercourse ain't that how onlyfans bitches earn money? Anyways i'm pretty sure a lot of her costumers are willing to pay tons of money even by just getting a BlowJ from her. That's how Kirigaya exploited her weakness and that mentioning of hotel room the payment for that is probably high that's why he's so persistent on taking Hanabi to the hotel even if they cause a scene on that place while a lot of people are watching them until Yukishiro foiled his plan.

 

[Shinratenseikami]

The only concern left I have for Hanabi is what will happen to her once she stop selling her body now that she knows everything she's done is useless? She basically sold herself for nothing and during that one month period there should be at least one or two costumers who tried filming the whole thing while Hanabi is serving them which can be use to blackmail her cuz we know she's mentally weak against blackmail.

This author would probably cook something dark with that kind of plot if they hit rock bottom lol

 

[fetrorunk]

I get that the MC has all the reason to distrust Hanabi and not sympathize with her one bit (I'm with him), but what the hell is with his attitude in the first half of this chapter? He should at least take Hanabi's situation (not even Hanabi herself) seriously because he should at least believe Yukishiro, the timid girl she is, who felt that she needed to seriously help Hanabi with her situation.

"Even if she's trying to be remorseful"
"Her head constantly in the clouds"
"I absolutely refuse to be dragged into a situation again where Hanabi takes center stage"

Dude, GTFO. Is he too dense and/or stupid to read the situation? Does he really think Hanabi, as she is right now, would go as far as to sell her dignity just to get back at him? Or is his head just that far up his ass?

For someone who has apparently changed so much for the better, for someone who is depicted to have matured and moved on from his past, he still feels the need to be "superior" to Hanabi even when she's at her lowest, whatever I meant by that. Not saying that he's not allowed to feel that way and have flaws despite all his growth. I'm just saying that if his girlfriend whom he trusts so much thinks that the situation needs to be taken seriously, then he should be serious as well.

The MC thinks he's matured and moved on acting all dismissive about everything Hanabi, but it's really just his inferiority complex acting up because he feels the need to be better than Hanabi, as I said earlier. Intentional writing? I don't think so. This is probably just the author's idea of what maturity is, but maybe I'm wrong.

I shouldn't even care this much about the manga ever since they started working at the cafe, but the "mature" and overly glazed (in-universe) MC just really pissed me off today.

 

[reicchimaster]

She was gangbanged for nothing. Such a retarded arc.

 

[Oobaka-san]

I will only believe that she already crossed the line by doing sexual intercourse with her costumers if she tell them her experience during that one month period of selling her body, but as long as no explanation are present here people can always assume that she's still a virgin.

Fyi as long as you have a pretty face and a good body proportion like Hanabi. If you're smart you can still earn tons of money without needing to do an actual sexual intercourse ain't that how onlyfans bitches earn money? Anyways i'm pretty sure a lot of her costumers are willing to pay tons of money even by just getting a BlowJ from her. That's how Kirigaya exploited her weakness and that mentioning of hotel room the payment for that is probably high that's why he's so persistent on taking Hanabi to the hotel even if they cause a scene on that place while a lot of people are watching them until Yukishiro foiled his plan.

You're free to your opinion, but it really doesn't seem to fit the scenario at all. Or the author, who as I said doesn't shy away from vaginal rape one bit.

Yes, it's true that she could make a lot of money just giving BJs. But it stopping there requires that Kirigaya be willing to stop them and them being willing to follow orders. Kirigaya doesn't show one iota of respect or concern for Hanabi, or any deep forward thinking, so frankly it would be beyond unnatural for him to settle for making "tons" from making her give BJs. If anyone even suggested that, his likely reply would be that he can make several times more with her "other" mouth, or even noting that he could increase his income by making her use all her holes at the same time. He hates her and his only concern is not getting caught due to the big crowds coming in.

And again, the author herself doesn't seem like the type to do this. There are many authors for whom I'd automatically agree with you, as many love to cop out at that point, bringing in rape and prostitution for drama then calling "no, actually these people who assaulted and hurt her never actually deflowered her!" all so that a potential "heroine" wouldn't be "used goods" in the fans' eyes. But this author doesn't go that way. Of the other works I've read by her, you're far more likely to either get a girl who was forced into prostitution struggling to reclaim her dignity and accept that there really is a chance even for a "filthy" girl like her, or a group of girls that have been violated in all kinds of cruel ways and then jump at the opportunity to do to their abuser everything that'd been done to them, as well as everything done to their friends who didn't survive (seriously some things this lady wrote were beyond brutal).

 

[gggadget]

What was the point of selling her into prostitution then? What was the point of any of this if the response from Souma is "I think you overreacted a bit"?

Is the fuckboi going to receive jail time? No of course not. There is literally no time for him to receive his comeuppance as the plot moves forward to yet another new problem.

 

[henman]

We just barely resolved hanabi mess, and I thought we're going to return to MC's case of being drugged...but no! There's just too many thots around!

Thank you for the translation, gentlemen

 

[chiruno09]

Bro is out here fixing every single problem the people around him have.

 

[Kaito57]

So the story is going act like hanabi didn't get raped in the park or whatever when this video shit first happened...

This chapter is literally MC saying out loud that he couldn't care less about what happened to Hanabi or what she does or thinks as the only reason he intervened was because this dumb hoe actions were pulling Megane-chan into her drama.

If anything, I'm actually glad that he's seemingly not opening any door that could lead to reconcialition.

 

[sp0ffee]

Mc got that dawg in him

 

[Shinratenseikami]

I get that the MC has all the reason to distrust Hanabi and not sympathize with her one bit (I'm with him), but what the hell is with his attitude in the first half of this chapter? He should at least take Hanabi's situation (not even Hanabi herself) seriously because he should at least believe Yukishiro, the timid girl she is, who felt that she needed to seriously help Hanabi with her situation.

"Even if she's trying to be remorseful"
"Her head constantly in the clouds"
"I absolutely refuse to be dragged into a situation again where Hanabi takes center stage"

Dude, GTFO. Is he too dense and/or stupid to read the situation? Does he really think Hanabi, as she is right now, would go as far as to sell her dignity just to get back at him? Or is his head just that far up his ass?

For someone who has apparently changed so much for the better, for someone who is depicted to have matured and moved on from his past, he still feels the need to be "superior" to Hanabi even when she's at her lowest, whatever I meant by that. Not saying that he's not allowed to feel that way and have flaws despite all his growth. I'm just saying that if his girlfriend whom he trusts so much thinks that the situation needs to be taken seriously, then he should be serious as well.

The MC thinks he's matured and moved on acting all dismissive about everything Hanabi, but it's really just his inferiority complex acting up because he feels the need to be better than Hanabi, as I said earlier. Intentional writing? I don't think so. This is probably just the author's idea of what maturity is, but maybe I'm wrong.

I shouldn't even care this much about the manga ever since they started working at the cafe, but the "mature" and overly glazed (in-universe) MC just really pissed me off today.

His reaction pretty makes sense, though with all the years of Hanabi's manipulation towards him? He would definitely change his attitude towards her once he learns that she's selling off her body, because she was being blackmailed using that video.

 

[Shinratenseikami]

Oh, wow, the MC doesn't care about the video... Who would've imagined that such a stupid, weak piece of blackmail would turn out to be... weak? What a stupid, over-the-top plotline...

Anyway, Volume 5 came out on June 18, and it only covers up to Chapter 38, so none of the whole sex trafficking and drugging stuff is in it. I think there's an extra chapter, but I don't know what it's about. Either way, it didn't sell particularly well. According to Shoseki Ranking data, Volume 5 sold only around 933 physical copies during its first week, and there's no sales data available after that. It also has the lowest Amazon rating of the five volumes so far, at 4.1. Here's the sales graph:

Note: The data for Volume 4 is only illustrative. The volume actually sold fewer copies than that. The figure of 1,250 represents the minimum number of copies a volume needed to sell to appear in the weekly rankings at the time of its release.

Also, here are the current Amazon ratings for each volume:

Thanks for the chapter!

The sales dropped, because of how fucked up the story become probably even its loyal readers avoided it too, because even if you hate Hanabi to the core and we all know she deserves any punishment she got... I mean losing the person you're obsessesing with since childhood already dealt a huge blow on her + she even fell on a cliff and dislocated her leg and was hospitalized. She already pretty much received enough punishment... but making her into a prostitute from a blackmail is crossing the line and way too brutal for a punishment. All the wrong doings she's done to the MC doesn't warrant that kind of treatment at all.

The only way i could think of to salvage this story is reconciliation with MC and Hanabi... Also revealing that she hasn't crossed that line yet... yeah i'm talking about s*xual intercourse.

 

[fetrorunk]

His reaction pretty makes sense, though with all the years of Hanabi's manipulation towards him? He would definitely change his attitude towards her once he learns that she's selling off her body, because she was being blackmailed using that video.

I agree, it's just that his nonchalant and dismissive attitude towards Hanabi is preventing him from actually reading the situation, and that pisses me off even though I hate Hanabi as much as the MC does.

 

[Goflow11]

Wait so in other words, Hanabi Prostituted herself for no reason!?! What the fuck man.

 

[MiguelH224]

Wait, who was Ayana?

The girl who cheated on his homie, the one he got back with

 

[MiguelH224]

wait who is ayana ? is she the girl that druged him ?

Nah thats someone else