Osananajimi no Hito - Oneshot

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Magnificent. One of those oneshots that actually feels pretty complete and satisfying. And the character designs are great (particularly the MC's and that one short haired female classmate).
 
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We got BDSM, people communicating, childhood friends becoming a couple (plus the topic of marriage) & finally a cheeky brat got rightfully corrected💢💢💢. A great oneshot overall & would like to see them be a couple but I'll take what I can get. Thanks for the translations.

Even a discussion of what consent looks like, albeit not in a super intricate way.
 
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God...:kreygasm:
This is genuinly sick :meguupog:.
I often read those rom-com that repeat each other plot :pacman:
But this one is original,
BDSM :question: + Gyaru + Romance = 🔥
Anyway, i feel like i have read 50 chapters reading this Oneshot
Thanks for the realease.
 
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this is one of those rare cases where a oneshot should stay a oneshot because it is too good and properly established- a serialization would end up way worse than this 99.9% of the time simply due to editors.

Exploring the "line up guys, I will step on you other guys in front of my love interest" plot point in this oneshot and just dropping it was a giga huge mistake, tho. The first rage and the bit after felt genuine and organic, this was just out of character forced without adding anything. This is something for a serialization after character+story development. Here it was fully disconnected and uncomfortable because of it being ignored and thrown out immediately.
 
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Lascivious shoes? What is bro talking about

I love the FMCs hair tho, so much volume, so Fluffy

And I agree with above poster, even without the BDSM slant this really holds up as a good story, warms the heart a little
 

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