Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Dec 1, 2020
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Waste of time.
Hello fellow traveler
To me, it felt like a good punchline coming from the moments before it, while her girlfriends simply asking where she got those heels took the absurdity to the next level.Exploring the "line up guys, I will step on you other guys in front of my love interest" plot point in this oneshot and just dropping it was a giga huge mistake, tho. The first rage and the bit after felt genuine and organic, this was just out of character forced without adding anything. This is something for a serialization after character+story development. Here it was fully disconnected and uncomfortable because of it being ignored and thrown out immediately.