Dex-chan lover
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Just to be sureHe had to look up nostalgia, smh.
Just to be sureHe had to look up nostalgia, smh.
inb4 ntr ending
It could be worse. It could be the Star Wars Wall of Text..."show not tell" is very much my preferred way to tell stories, especially ones that are so steeped in emotional moments rather than just narrating the events of the day or something.
Only if there's something there that make it worthwhile. Sometimes it doesn't really add anything.An every-other-chapter swapping of "his POV" / "her POV" would be ideal, I agree - but I hope we just get her perspective on things, full stop - you gave perfect reasons so I won't try to just re-word what you've already stated.
I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that in suggesting it I was absolutely implying the author would be doing it because it wouldn't be boring.Only if there's something there that make it worthwhile. Sometimes it doesn't really add anything.
You forgot being the best at any sport while also being the number one student in all of Japan, or being the owner of a company that makes millions while being a teenager.it's insane how she doesnt have to be "the prettiest girl in the school, top beauty of the school, school idol" for it to be this good. In fact, its better without those stupid tropes where the top school beauty rejects the handsome soccer club ace for the anti-social loser weeb that every loser self insert thinks is the best thing ever
Crab mentality.why be like this.