Ossan Yuusha wa Kajiya de Slow Life Hajimemashita - Ch. 2

[MangaDex]

 

[rollialana]

I hope my translation is finally at an appropriate standard. I want to express my gratitude for all the helpful comments and feedback. I still don't have a proofreader, but I hope everything is still meaningful and readable. For now, I will be reworking Chapter 1, and after that, I'll start on Chapter 3.

 

[majjkiii]

thanks for the upload

 

[Dragonite69]

I hope my translation is finally at an appropriate standard. I want to express my gratitude for all the helpful comments and feedback. I still don't have a proofreader, but I hope everything is still meaningful and readable. For now, I will be reworking Chapter 1, and after that, I'll start on Chapter 3.

English is not my first language but the translation is understandable for me and i enjoy it

 

[Magpie_Bridge]

ah, so good equipment does matter after all! get rekt king

 

[AciAulia]

am i carzy or before had chap 3, and now disappear again

 

[pandatime]

Damn S rank kitchen knife? That one fancy knife for the chef yo. Wanna point out that she is right at thr start too if you think about it yeah 170 is probaly young for Dragons aint it

 

[Georgeorat]

am i carzy or before had chap 3, and now disappear again

There was a duplicate, got deleted

 

[Animtard]

Not this troupe again... Secretly OP shit is tiring bro.

 

[rollialana]

am i carzy or before had chap 3, and now disappear again

I uploadet chapter2 twice 😅 so i had to delet one of them ups

 

[ElectroSlam]

I have the feeling this mc is gunna be a really bad merchant, he’s probably gunna get scammed so easily. I can feel it in my bones😂

 

[asherdales]

Arg my inner forging enthusiast is big mad at yet another author that googled blacksmithing, read a summary, and went "I got this."

 

[nathan67003]

Aayy, better typesetting, awesome!

 

[FloorRoof]

Good job improving your work. Takes character. If I was criticized this much for doing something for the first time, I'd make sure to never try it again.

 

[rollialana]

Arg my inner forging enthusiast is big mad at yet another author that googled blacksmithing, read a summary, and went "I got this."

Funny you say that the translation for the hardening was so much worse that i had to improvise a lil bit idont know what the heck the original japaneese text waa brabeling about. Ps i am a former metallworker so i knew a bit of forging. XD

 

[Nitely]

I hope my translation is finally at an appropriate standard. I want to express my gratitude for all the helpful comments and feedback. I still don't have a proofreader, but I hope everything is still meaningful and readable. For now, I will be reworking Chapter 1, and after that, I'll start on Chapter 3.

Imho, it is readable and understandable.
thank you very much..

We can think about others critiques as a motivational critique.
Because, a good quality product will attract money. God bless you, Rolliii

 

[Chizan]

Were those really demons and not the king's knights?

Also, the king would really regret not letting the mc forge the knights' armor and weapons if he knew...

 

[akselbuch]

I hope my translation is finally at an appropriate standard. I want to express my gratitude for all the helpful comments and feedback. I still don't have a proofreader, but I hope everything is still meaningful and readable. For now, I will be reworking Chapter 1, and after that, I'll start on Chapter 3.

i was gonna tell you to do stuff like doing a "-" following the split point of words but it seems someone got ahead of me on that advice

 

[adrianojuniocunha]

thats pretty godd. But I fell like the MC is gonna appear (fenotipicaly) more young trught out the show.

 

[Senpaithatfriendzonesyou]

The translation is superior to the bunny group that shall not be named.

looking for new series as some of my favorites have ended so this is good.