Otoko Girai na Bijin Shimai o Namae mo Tsugezu ni Tasuketara Ittai Dounaru? - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[maxiusagi]

thanks for picking up this manga
looking forward for the next chapter

 

[ieatass69]

TS and CLRD look real good. TL sucks ass though. The art also sucks ass lol.

 

[lesseffective]

Is it me, or is the translation just that bad cause I’m having a stroke reading this lol

Please never translate anything ever again without a proofreader who can speak english

TS and CLRD look real good. TL sucks ass though. The art also sucks ass lol.

I gave up on page 8. "Men" is already plural, so the only time an s should be added to the end is to make it possessive.

Story seems like it could have been fun, but this script is absolute garbage.

 

[duaangka22]

It's an ok manga ig, I'll wait for the next chapter..

 

[feha]

When the police arrives, they see a maniac in a pumpkin mask wielding a bloodied weapon... and open fire before asking any questions. He clearly killed the family living there after all.

 

[Twics]

The series has potential but...

 

[Weebius]

I wanna strap this author to a dissection table and root around in their head to get an idea of how you can be this trashy this many times in a row

And later myself for still being curious enough to click on it

 

[YuraYuraYuriYuri]

If you wanna know what the general direction of the story is.....

SPOILER ALERT

Spoiler

From reading some of the LN chapters a while back our mc here saves this family from this guy and all of them fall in love with him (including the mum) for his heroic act. The family have all had bad experiences with guys which has led to them constantly avoiding men, luckily for Mr MC he is welcomed into the family with open arms where he is obsessed over between the three members (the sisters become yandere). In the novel there are frequent s*x scenes between all of them, though since this is suggestive I doubt they really will show anything. It's overall just gonna be your classic harem, with a bit of comedy, a lil bit of drama and a lot of romance

Including their mom too
Oyakodon nice😋

 

[basicusername117]

I wanna strap this author to a dissection table and root around in their head to get an idea of how you can be this trashy this many times in a row

And later myself for still being curious enough to click on it

If the author can put shit like this out without shame you really have to wonder, same goes for the artist

https://imgur.com/a/llCBtBE

 

[VladDracul2]

Including their mom too
Oyakodon nice😋

With extra serving of eggs

 

[HunterCO]

MC's 10000 IQ play, don't call the police for insurance if things go wrong because the guy has a knife

Also the characters all look like they would be in a hentai

 

[piemantr]

If I had a nickel for every sexual LN I've read on Travistranslations that later became a manga, I'd have 3 nickels. Which isn't a lot, but it's weird that it happened thrice.

 

[vannn]

That escalated real quick

 

[AAA1]

Uhh i hate the art. Ingoku danchi have better expression and gesture

And better plot too. A 2/10 for the effort i guess

 

[Eija]

if i drew people this poorly i simply wouldnt make manga

 

[siotechua]

welp, it's gonna get bloody huh

 

[lol126]

I have to point this out if the translation on pg. 14 is accurate "I would call the police... but that guy has a knife!!" Like WHAT!!?? The guy doesn't know you are there so how would that stop you from doing it? Also to note that on pg. 23 he's going to buy time for the police.
Noticing that there quite a few spelling and grammar errors like on pg. 19 panel 2 the burglar says "he has a good body" then changes the gender in the following sentence. Also that same panel the word "believe" is misspelled.
The manga itself I have to say that I saw the Reddit post for this & this looks like pure degenerate stuff that I'm definitely going to follow with the hopes the translation has some improved proofreading.

It's not accurate. He literally says a page later that he has to buy time for the police to arrive, so he likely already notified them and is simply getting ready to go in order to stop anything worse from happening in the mean time

 

[Karikko]

Just wrap your bat in barbed wires, name it Lucille, and finally, become Negan.

...and start to enter the scene whistling

 

[GaboDabo]

This looks like it is going to be total garbage.

I'll be seeing you all next chapter.

 

[Daktyl]

Is it me, or is the translation just that bad cause I’m having a stroke reading this lol

Translation seems fine, but the editing is lackluster. I was going to volunteer to proofread, but I can't find a way to contact the group anywhere.