Otoko Girai na Bijin Shimai wo Namae mo Tsugezu ni Tasuketara Ittai Dounaru? - Ch. 21

[MangaDex]

 

[HokuClan]

Also to people who dont know me and darlings relationship its like a sibling one so this is not a real snipe its just one chapter and thats it im not uploading anymore chapters. Also the me and darling siblings lore is to long for me to explain join the discord and ping darling 5 times and ask her to explain the lore to you!

Also lastly the reason the quality is not great is cuz im so fucking sleepy since I have school finals that im studying for and the time it is right now so please dont yell at me for the quality until I wake up lol

 

[gabarbie]

NGL that was a painful read

 

[Xelric]

Damn... Mama maid is a dangerous person. But a danger I'm willing to take on.

 

[LonelyDarlingUwU]

NO WAY I GOT SNIPED-! Ahhh this quality… MY EYES

 

[HokuClan]

NO WAY I GOT SNIPED-! Ahhh this quality… MY EYES

Im half asleep on 3h of sleep with a headace what do you expect its a snipe by me

 

[HokuClan]

NGL that was a painful read

If its because I did terrible its cuz im right now equal to someone taking a fish and telling it go translate

 

[MesaOracle]

MILF: She does a body good.

 

[rsijeveh]

Skip the product and went straight to the factories

 

[Zen44]

Lucky bastard

 

[Erbakhan]

I wish that were me

 

[deadrabbits]

I'm really sick of r18 novels getting adapted into sexless manga.

 

[Grailm]

Ok, seriously. Enough with the teasing, at least say theres been sex.

 

[dexdoujinmanga]

Better finish your finals first before working on it. Most of us don't really about the lore or whatever circumstances between you and darling, but if it's related to commission, why? Just why?

 

[Septazia]

NO WAY I GOT SNIPED-! Ahhh this quality… MY EYES

If you are still going to translate it, I'll happily read it again.

I'm really sick of r18 novels getting adapted into sexless manga.

Compared to the Web Novel, this feels odd. While I appreciate the additions, the original prose lacked in the spark required for imagination, yet progress now seems slow—despite the girls openly masturbating in front of him, and even bathing with him. He confessed back in chapter 15, so he should be more at ease with them.

The WN also had the sisters be less competitive and jealous, and is funny because the Manga seemed in line with that though given they had planned to approach him together from the start of the reveal.

The chapters have lost their intensity—nothing has hit like the chapters leading up to 15. It feels out of character, like a race car suddenly crawling for six months. I don’t expect immediate ‘pillow fighting,’ but the confession should mean more development.

Not much seems to have happened between Christmas and now, and with the birthday in February, almost a month must have passed.
Is not to say that the chapters were bad, I liked Christmas, I liked what they did with his friends, whom they seemed somewhat non existent in the WN up to much later, just not as good.

There is a subtle but huge difference between a awkward couple and an uncomfortable one, he should be used to them by now to a certain degree and the latter makes me, the reader uncomfortable too, compare it to the leads of Houkago Kitaku Biyori despite them not being a couple yet, please author, you got a cool character who has nice friends and protected his GF various times, don't make him weak now.

 

[razorshaleh]

I still don't know about grandparents relationship from MC father, always hating both Hayato parents & Hayato himself
These 2 twins really very lustful with Hayato, Fortunately he has strong faith

I like Cosplay Maid from Okaasan route Oyakodon incoming Boys

Thanks for translating

 

[hypo]

Wrong choice of pronouns on end of page 13...

 

[zeinzki]

Bro got both Products and Factory

 

[Phantommemorial]

HEADSHOT!

 

[tokichiroaoi]

Holy macaroni!