I feel like that sentence works better with just "their mother," or else it kind of sounds like Kei died too. As his siblings, "their" sort of implies him being in there too. Not worth pinging someone over though months later.
I feel like that sentence works better with just "their mother," or else it kind of sounds like Kei died too. As his siblings, "their" sort of implies him being in there too. Not worth pinging someone over though months later.