after the first couple chapters it was pretty clear that the writing is.....rough, to say the least.
but man... I could barely make it 10 chapters through. it's just not worth the time, even as like a low commitment, junk food kind of read.
the pacing is poor and paneling is awkward. author isn't very good at creating scenarios that flow well or even make a whole lot of sense within the world they've built. (ex. letting the 10 yr old daughter of a VERY high ranking person wander where she pleases with no supervision) Suspension of disbelief can only carry it so far.
and then, like many have said, the MC is really hard to like. Which tbh I wouldn't mind bc its cool seeing MCs actually grow instead of being perfect fresh out the box. but none of the characters are interesting enough to carry the story, and the story isn't particularly well done enough to carry the main character.
I'd recommend just playing the actual princess maker games instead lol