Otonari no Oneesan ni Arekore sareru - Vol. 1 Ch. 14

[MangaDex]

 

[rabidfish]

call da police

 

[UdenEmpati]

thanks for the chapter and speedy work on this.

I think the pun at the end might make more sense (at least to English-speaking folks) as something like "In fact, I'm a full Happy Meal" (maybe 'Happy Meal' is specific to certain parts of the USA, and if that's the case then that's on me) - but it might read/flow better that way. Purely one person's opinion, and I don't mean to step on your toes or anything.


Otherwise yeah. I hope this is her slowly closing the distance (weird to be wishing that when she's 22 and he's...like, 14), but building on the foundation we've been given, even if this a 100 chapter series and we're not even a 5th of the way through, I'd be glad for some actual velocity to at least one main character's feelings toward the other and for moves to be made that indicate that in a more overt manner.

 

[Eighty-six]

"If you fall asleep again, I'll steal your lips at--"

"ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ"

Otherwise yeah. I hope this is her slowly closing the distance (weird to be wishing that when she's 22 and he's...like, 14)

Given this manga doesn't have a "Pornographic" label, and she's not a social invalid or complete womanchild (otherwise, there'd be more obvious progress), my own expectation is that is that he's going to viciously spin back the second he turns 18 and sweep her off her feet.

ADD: Also probably, by the time he spins back, it'll have also been demonstrated that he's become emotionally mature enough to have an intimate relationship-of-equals with her.

 

[spawnknight]

erotic tag

...Don't you DARE tease us with a good time!

 

[Archol10]

ngl I'm a bit miffed that you didn't have him ask her if she's upset instead of asking if she's angry. Feel like that would have been a better setup for the happy meal joke.
Then again my understanding of translating manga is basic at best so probably just talking outta my ass

 

[phil777]

call da police

...But not for me!

 

[SquigglesJP]

thanks for the chapter and speedy work on this.

I think the pun at the end might make more sense (at least to English-speaking folks) as something like "In fact, I'm a full Happy Meal" (maybe 'Happy Meal' is specific to certain parts of the USA, and if that's the case then that's on me) - but it might read/flow better that way. Purely one person's opinion, and I don't mean to step on your toes or anything.


Otherwise yeah. I hope this is her slowly closing the distance (weird to be wishing that when she's 22 and he's...like, 14), but building on the foundation we've been given, even if this a 100 chapter series and we're not even a 5th of the way through, I'd be glad for some actual velocity to at least one main character's feelings toward the other and for moves to be made that indicate that in a more overt manner.

Ohhh, not at all. that sounds nicer actually. Thanks for the suggestion Uden!

We know she's like in love with him, now it's a waiting game to see if he responds to her feelings I think

 

[SquigglesJP]

ngl I'm a bit miffed that you didn't have him ask her if she's upset instead of asking if she's angry. Feel like that would have been a better setup for the happy meal joke.
Then again my understanding of translating manga is basic at best so probably just talking outta my ass

not at all. sometimes we do have to change entire words or sentences for it to have a smoother flow / better understanding so yeah