Ougon no Keikenchi - Ch. 25

[ITSigno]

Probably just nitpicking, but some of the TL felt off to me:

Spoiler

Rare comment was more on "that's certainly an interesting story" from Blanc
who replied by being humble and say it's not

Blanc's asked what is Rare's race, not class.
And her second bubble should be "You don't seem to be a starter one"
It's the same meaning, but I think the current TL make her tone a bit...more arrogant? than curious.

I checked with one of our TLs and confirmed she was asking about race, not class. I've updated that page with their suggestions.

Thanks for bringing it to my attention

 

[Laisy]

Every appearance of Blanc is a joy! What an amazing character. But poor spartoi, she sent them through the grinder ):

The manga shows it pretty well too, what the knights have is teamwork and coordination, while Blanc just sent the spartoi to just charge in without a plan. Well it have worked for her in the previous towns, so she didn't think this time will be different...

That, and the previous towns defenses are just too weak. Need to remember the ruins were formerly a major transportation hub, their knights are no joke, Rare's forces are just that strong.

 

[chomikko]

"Rare exposes herself to another player"
My reaction: I wish it was me! Or that she can expose herself some more, I don't mind

 

[gazzy]

Imagine losing the chance to brag about your ultra rare world changing class

 

[MathMols]

Those 4 are just as cute as our wolf girls where when we first met them

 

[TypicalHuman]

i think phrasing in page 27 can be better
"Telling me everything that should've been top secret is way too risky" seems like it should be "Telling her everything that should've been top secret is way too risky"

the jp is -
本来なら秘匿したほうが賢い情報を
私に話してしまう迂闊さがある。
well yes it has "私に" but the way you phrase it feels like the sentence is wrong. it should be something like:
"She’s careless enough to tell me information that should've been secret."
and the follow up can be"Speaking honestly is risky."


well i can be wrong because english is not native to me