Outo One Ope Golem Master. Masakano Tsuihou!? ~Jiyuu no mi ni Nattanode Deshi no Bijin Yuusha-tachi to Issho ni Saikyou Gouremu Tsukurimasu. Modotte …

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Dude I hate when they make a character do a long ass exposition dump to the people who kicked out the MC, that shit is so tiring I just skipped right through it. Let the people find out the consequences naturally. Long ass title, harem, poor writing, this is looking like the sloppiest slop that ever slopped
 
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Just found out you are in dept yo.
 
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Can anyone suggest an excellent isekai story featuring summoning from our world, with a capable and intelligent main character who knows how to manage his relationships, especially with women?
Asking for a miracle there mate.
 
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i tried to read the WN but for some reason the king just ignorance but hardy incompetent, the problem actually stem more with his country nobility being bunch of "fool disconeted with reality"
 
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Hero didn't need to find her master. She knew where he was going. She knew exactly what he wants/needs. She went and negotiated with the princess of the nation where he was going to long before he arrived. She was 20 steps ahead of everyone else.
 
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Thank you for the scans.

The pace is absolutely horrendous, however, so I'm dropping this.
 
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Feels rather relatable these days
I wish the world was run by morons. They'd have a leg up. No, more realistically it's run by people who aren't that far off from the grave and really just want to live in comfort and luxury as long as possible. As in people who intentionally screw the rest of us over for the short term gain. Which actually kinda makes sense of the idiocy here. Like if the world had been under threat to be destroyed I can believe a King that only cared about themselves being able to live in comfort and luxury who virtually ignored everything going on in reality. Then they just kept doing that even when the world wasn't going to end. Now it's too late and the only difference is they actually have to deal with consequences.
 
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What kind of meeting was that :nyoron:
The exposition kind. We're gone so far even trying to make it natural. Just have the character one sidedly talk to the other party all while explaining stuff they should already know and not really stuff that even matters for the story right now and still somehow missing a few beats that we the audience could benefit from. Anyway this is the "Here's why you'll regret firing the MC" chapter.
 
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Is this a record for a slop power fantasy manga putting the incompetent boss who fires their most valuable member in their pace? I mean it's cool they blitzed through the annoying part fast but will that actually leave room for the story to do what it needs to do?
 

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