More than the broken flow in the narrative, I'm pissed off about the censorship. Takes you right out of the story, just because a bunch of babies are whining too loudly that they can't eat meat so nobody should be allowed to.
Uh-oh, other peerless dad shows up now. Your son is going to be mad if you mess with Noh too much there masked pops.
Also I like how whenever Noh starts thinking he's gotten stronger someone shows up to let him know his level isn't quite there yet.