Pervert Hero and the #1 Fan - Ch. 4

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this was cute. it really is amazing how he didn't notice
 
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Short story indeed. It feels like it was written for the author to reuse the story later on. No, it definitely was. Usually this is considered bad writing, but I actually find it hilarious that the comic felt like it was still going to continue right until the second half of this chapter. Just hard stop because of a cute doggo
 
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What an abrupt ending. I'm totally fine with the low-key ending, but it would have been nice in these circumstances to stop and smell the flowers a bit more at the end.
 

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