Phantom Busters - Ch. 33 - Let’s Go To Shangri-Land!

[MangaDex]

 

[Bertramm]

There is a double text translation on page 13 @Nemoa_is_noone

 

[Bertramm]

Now whats up with teenagers wearing their school uniform at Disney Sea?

Backthen I was in Japan around early September. Even during weekdays it's really packed with a lot of people. And I've seen a lot of students wearing their uniform there.

 

[Valkit]

Thanks for the chapter!

 

[FuransuKopi]

warm my heart seeing these kids enjoying youth

 

[nekopatisserie]

Thanks for your hard work translating!
I used to help edit in college and English is my first language. If this helps, here are some editing notes!

• Pg 8
  • "Look it's tiny there's a Koreshiki there" --> probably meant to say "Look, there's a tiny Koreshiki over there!"
  • "Hey! Where do you think going young man?!" --> probably "Hey! Where do you think you're going, young man?!"
• Pg 10
  • "Okay times up." --> "Okay, time's up."
• Pg 12
  • "Well...That child, yes. He used to talk to me a lot when he were little" --> "Well...That child, yes. He used to talk to me a lot when he was little."
  • "Apparently, he once had a greeting with a clown in a during a windy day." --> "Apparently, he once met a clown here on a windy day."
  • "I was part of the original cast when this place was launched I wouldn't not know something like that!" --> "I was part of the original cast when this place was launched. I wouldn't not know something like that!"
• Pg 13
  • "I've heard before that children tend to have stronger spiritual sensitivity" shows up twice
• Pg 17
  • "You guys we were in line at the Fall Castle..." --> "You guys were in line at the Fall Castle..."
• Pg 19
  • "Come on it'll be fun" --> "Come on, it'll be fun!"
• Pg 20
  • "I don't know I just have fun hanging out with my friends." --> "I don't know, I just have fun hanging out with my friends."
• Pg 21
  • "Mysterious tech it slides?!" Not sure what this was meant to say
• Pg 27
  • "And who's" --> "And whose"
• Pg 29
  • "All I can hear the children crying" --> "All I can hear are the children crying!"

 

[Al_Azif]

I'm surprised the park didn't immediately get shut down after children have died.