Potion Danomi de Ikinobimasu! - Vol. 2 Ch. 9.2

[forecast]

@RhaegarG
Because it is set in the future, the author has a ways away to cover up that hole. Simply saying she wandered the world repaying those who helped her after she got sufficient power or influence will do.

Foreshadow in a story is simply a cliffhanger to make the audience think "i want to see how he/she reach that point"

 

[jonathaneze]

its all good when she pay back someone kindness back

but how the fuck she know all about this

 

[RhaegarG]

@forecast
Authors who slip into third person omniscience to try and neatly tie up every little plot thread are garbage. A competent writer wouldn't need to coddle their readership and could instead incorporate resolution as a story/world-building element later on. This resolution is crude, and because of its crudeness comes across as disingenuous.

 

[forecast]

@RhaegarG
This author did incorporate a resolution as a story/world building element at the later part of the story. -_-
The resolution being the goddess eye organization.
The guard bit is not "plot". It is not a main part of the story, its like a side story where reward was given for his good deed.
The author is always in a state of omniscience because it is their story. The mc is the one who knew and she knew because of her organization.

 

[Ferrenia]

I just think, why it weren't being side chapter, such as 9.5.
I think it was more better than sticking like this one

 

[Riztard]

 

[duongvuduc96]

Wow, she is real angel, not many people can remember some stranger help through years

 

[Kampfarsch]

We didnt even know he had a son
This is years in the future
Just why this is so pointless

Spoiler

 

[-Aincrad-]

These random stories in a random timeline randomly put in the chapters is just stupid.

Why not just make .5 chapters