Pumpkin Time - Ch. 21

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@Nimroth I agree. I'm not saying the story is not interesting, but almost none of the elements that make a Genderswap story captivating are in play. We completely glossed over the whole gender identity conflict.

I feel like the protagonist's reaction to having the ML so close now should be worse than it is, considering that she still has a lot of pent-up frustrations from having her identity stripped, plus, she's at an age where emotions are at their wildest. I'm surprised she hasn't gone nuclear yet.
 
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In terms of nanometers per light year, yeah

Edit: are you talking abt the translators or Ritsu?
Cuz if it's the translators I would like to retract my statement
 
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I think it's funny how despite Izuki being the central focus and the main character, it's her thoughts which are hard to understand. While Ritsu is very open to anyone reading this, but mysterious to everyone in the story. What does Izuki actually think of Ritsu at this point? Does she have romantic intentions? I thought so but the date chapters had none of it.
 
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@Nimroth I agreed it could work with izuki being a tomboy when she was young but have to stop acting like that once she hit a certain age
 
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Too precious. I like her coming to terms with finally having feelings for the first time after becoming a girl, I think it’s being Handled really well. I just feel for him cuz I want him to know that he’s found her! I think he knows subconsciously which is interesting too. Great story! More please
 
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DUDE
IT'S YOU
JUST COME OUT OF THE GENDERBENDED CLOSET ALREADY

but realistically that would be really hard. Like who would believe you if you said you were a guy but suddenly woke up as a girl?
BUT RITSU WILL BELIEVE HE WILL BE HAPPY WE ALL KNOW IT
 
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Theres 3 ways a magical exolanation could be completely ignored most.of which would make more sense given her incredibly relaxed demeanor. Tomboy? Bam easy. Weird raised as a guy story? Okay maybe some more identity crisis.
A trans story? That makes the most sense of the non magical solutions. Not wanting him to find out, coukd cause a bad reaction. Outing herself would be dangerous but would also expain why she doesnt seem to be worrying
 
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im going to puke blood please dont be the second ml get the fuck away from us with that interesting shit IM BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!! fuckboy looking ass fuck off !!!!!!!! ritsu is itsuki/izukisexual please and thank you <3
 
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God I hope this dude doesn’t become a love rival. Take your dumbass sister and fuck right back off to America
 
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why cant you be together and be done about it. this is getting drawn out for too long.
 

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