Qǐng Qīfu Wǒ ba, Èyì Xiǎojiě! - Vol. 12 Ch. 163 - Intertwined with Her ❤︎

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this is how you write a yuri story that continues past the initial getting together. take note, green yuri. they're obviously into each other, they love each other, and they also communicate. they do hump like crazy, of course, but they're not doing it instead of communicating

green yuri is not really trying to be deeper or conveying actual love or whatever.
they have entirely different agendas.
green 'yuri' is also not feeling like yuri at all.
it's one of the worst yuri i've ever read.
 
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You know, I was thinking last chapter Elsa was going to go "Why yes I do need to finger you, how else will I draw the magical circuits on your insides" but. Damn, she actually did it, and with hardly an excuse
 

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