Qǐng Qīfu Wǒ ba, Èyì Xiǎojiě! - Vol. 13 Ch. 168 - Secrets?

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@foxhumilis Is there a problem with the upload? Some of the events and dialog seem out of order:
  1. Elsa says "Seize? ... are you sure you can actually seize her?" out of nowhere, only to have Fajera bring up seizing Evie much later.
  2. Fajera seems to teleport next to the Beast King for the "I'm just testing their mettle here..." mid-leap, only to leap again...
  3. And immediately be interrupted by him slamming his scepter and ending the fight for no reason.
Of these:
  1. Looks like misplaced dialog, although I'm not sure where it would fit, or what would go here instead.
  2. Is hard to explain without a problem in the raws.
  3. Does the page with Fajera jumping past Elsa to face Evie through Circè interrupting belong just before here?
 
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@foxhumilis Is there a problem with the upload? Some of the events and dialog seem out of order:
  1. Elsa says "Seize? ... are you sure you can actually seize her?" out of nowhere, only to have Fajera bring up seizing Evie much later.
  2. Fajera seems to teleport next to the Beast King for the "I'm just testing their mettle here..." mid-leap, only to leap again...
  3. And immediately be interrupted by him slamming his scepter and ending the fight for no reason.
Of these:
  1. Looks like misplaced dialog, although I'm not sure where it would fit, or what would go here instead.
  2. Is hard to explain without a problem in the raws.
  3. Does the page with Fajera jumping past Elsa to face Evie through Circè interrupting belong just before here?
I double-checked and the release is in order.

1. The previous chapter ended on "go for them", which is the same Chinese word as "seize", though we translated them slightly different between releases so that caused the issue, I think. The Chinese word is 抢 which both means "seize/snatch away" and "go for/fight for" something, and there's not an easy English word that encompasses both senses.
2+3. Raws are like this. Interpretation could be she was a distance behind the King, and so jumped to him?
 
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I'm half expecting Fajera to get turned into Elsa's pet TBH, heh

I do appreciate when artists strive to make skirts and legs always get captured in a dignified manner, which was especially on display in this chapter.

Thank you for the translation :>
 
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I double-checked and the release is in order.

1. The previous chapter ended on "go for them", which is the same Chinese word as "seize", though we translated them slightly different between releases so that caused the issue, I think. The Chinese word is 抢 which both means "seize/snatch away" and "go for/fight for" something, and there's not an easy English word that encompasses both senses.
2+3. Raws are like this. Interpretation could be she was a distance behind the King, and so jumped to him?
  1. Makes sense. I recommend fixing one or the other to match. "Seize? ... are you sure you can actually seize her?" strongly implies that "seize" is a direct quote of what the other person said. It's really confusing if they don't match.
  2. I think it may be artistic sloppiness, then. Fajera is also poorly placed on the stairs—almost floating.
  3. Seems to be fixed, now? From your reply, I thought you didn't change it, but the order is different from what I read yesterday. Huh.
 

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