Pg4: “ready for battle” -> Parabellum (Rou’s company name)
Pg5: the Dark Hero is positively a she.
Pg6: “pargatory” typo
Pg8: missing a . after me vs everyone else
Pg17: context here implies that it’s the water hero that’s being whiny here. The dark hero would be whiny for completely different (and positively hornier) reasons