Re:Zero kara Hajimeru Isekai Seikatsu - Daiyonshou - Seiiki to Gouyoku no Majou - Vol. 6 Ch. 29 - The Final Chat

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this is pretty unintelligible, i hope someone else does this chapter, betty needs justice
 
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this is pretty unintelligible, i hope someone else does this chapter, betty needs justice
Sorry to hear that my translation is unreadable, Could you point out where you couldn't understand the translation and i will do my best to fix it.
 
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Sorry to hear that my translation is unreadable, Could you point out where you couldn't understand the translation and i will do my best to fix it.
thanks for the effort.
confusing/unnatural dialogue 2,2-3; 4,1-2; 12,3-4; 18,1; 22,1; 26,3-4; 27,4-5
overall flow of dialogue from 2 to 3 doesnt make sense
spelling 4,2; 5,1; 5,3; 9,1; 10,4; 11,3; 12,1; 15,2; 15,5; 16,1; 17,1; 21,3; 29,5; 31,2; 31,3; 31,6
 
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thanks for the effort.
confusing/unnatural dialogue 2,2-3; 4,1-2; 12,3-4; 18,1; 22,1; 26,3-4; 27,4-5
overall flow of dialogue from 2 to 3 doesnt make sense
spelling 4,2; 5,1; 5,3; 9,1; 10,4; 11,3; 12,1; 15,2; 15,5; 16,1; 17,1; 21,3; 29,5; 31,2; 31,3; 31,6
No, Really, Thank you for going throught the effort of marking everything down. I tried to fix the dialoge so it would seem more natural, Dunno how good of an job i did though. Reworded page 2-3 dialogue and corrected spelling errors. Hopefully next few chapters i won't be needed to point these things out and i could catch them before releasing.
 

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