Reproductive Monument - Vol. 1 Ch. 10

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............................ how did it become THIS cryptic over two chapters? Like, I understood things for most of this story, but damn. It's like the author was forced to crunch the exposition he would have normally spread out over another handful of chapters.

Good art, intriguing story, good potential, but the ending felt so forced.
 

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Yep, I liked it but it became basically mumbo jumbo in the last part.
Probably a magazine cancelation, poor reception of this work, or the managaka had something else they wanted to pursue.

Thanks for taking the time to translate it, it was worth reading in any case, still charmed by the oldschoolish art style if nothing else.
 
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Feels like the author got the story axed at the 8th or 9th chapter.
Suddendly changing her from a spider youkai to a energy based alien, making that she had got everyone in the school under her control aside 4 people, for literally no reason as she didn't use them, making that MC had encountered the girl she possessed and that girl had some feeling for MC but then...it just stops there.
She left, unclear if the planet or just back to where the girl lives.
Is pretty bad as is clear with the exorcist kid that she was planned to be a japanese youkai and the whole thing was axed.
Even MC remembering to having seen her in the past and running to the location, should have been a classical cliche with the 2 meeting again but the mangaka wasn't given time.
This author makes unique stories, but this trash ending is clearly a axe.
 

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