Risou no Musume Nara Sekai Saikyou Demo Kawaigatte Kuremasuka - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

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"We didn't know at the time what was terrible stuff was going to happen to us" is the absolute worst narration device and it needs to be put out of its misery. Just do the terrible shit to your characters without this garbage, and stop faking out that terrible shit is going to happen with this piece of narration and then showing us that you were just exaggerating for comedic effect later while we're at it since that's getting to be just as bad.
 
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Damn that's a rough translation, mixing grammatical tense like they're getting paid per mistake!
 
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there are likely over 9000 million of these bastards... even more of a reason to just carpet bomb them rather than sending out soldiers
 
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Agreed, the "We didn't know at the time what was terrible stuff was going to happen to us" trope is the worst. This kind of forewarning only stresses out the reader for no reason or benefit, specially when the terrible stuff won't get published in the magazine till months or a year later.
 
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seeing him cry and be happy how his daughter has grown up, right in the feels man
 
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Oh no it's the totally unforseen and all powerful level 6 who could have thought a monster like this would exist
 

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