Dex-chan lover
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That's deep shit man.my thought is deeper than my wound
Guess that should be:
"As I've thought my wound is deep"
A whole lot better than the last time but there's still couple mistakes.
Would've been perfect if you'd double/triple check before release.
Also for names I think it would be better to stick with what the translated novels use to keep consistency.
@VladTheImpaler
Kisses and
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