Ryoushin no Shakkin wo Katagawari shite morau Jouken wa Nihon Ichi Kawaii Joshikousei to Issho ni Kurasu koto deshita. - Ch. 31

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Why do RomCom authors think we are here for the Drama? We don’t need conflict to progress a story. Slice of life + lucky pervert situations has served us well for decades as plot devices.

But instead of lucky pervert, we get relationship drama and “rival girls” added left and right. Booourns i say
 
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Guess we can add this series to list of manga with artificial relationship problems that would have been resolved in 3 pages had there been any actual dialogue between the characters.
This is the default, no point making a list
 
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It's stupid arcs like these that make people wanna drop a series...welp, see you guys next chapter.
 
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God bless him, he's trying. He tried asking her what was on her mind, and when that didn't go anywhere and things kept getting worse between them, he tells himself that he needs to try again. He's dense but he's trying.

Now it's on Kaede for not being honest with him.
 
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It's a parent's duty to embarrass their children.

Yeah, if something feels wrong, talk about it. Communication helps, and unless you're someone like Noa Saotome, there's rarely something like unnecessary communication.

These overheard bits and overreactions are so lame plot devices.

"It's nothing."
It never is. And if she starts with that, but says something following, it's just an excuse.

Bit of an extreme reaction to him saying he has other plans, but an extreme reaction is better than hiding it like before.

Hey, Taka's back!

And a sister. She's cute.

Ugh, Kaede's puttin'-on-a-brave-face sad smile hits like such a truck that I didn't think I could recover by the end of the chapter... Taka can always it around, tho. Hell yeah, Taka.
I think it hits far less because the situation is too easily solved by talking. Don't be "brave"; communicate.

It makes some sense that Yuya would backslide into his bad old ways of thinking under pressure, feeling like he has to handle everything on his own, that he's the only one he can rely on and that he has to be the one everyone around him relies on.
Which is why she needs to step up and don't enable that behaviour like she does by keeping silent about things that bother her. It's much easier to rely on someone who voices their concerns, since you know they will at the very least help keeping you on the right path.

Why do RomCom authors think we are here for the Drama? We don’t need conflict to progress a story. Slice of life + lucky pervert situations has served us well for decades as plot devices.
Conflict is perfectly fine. Dumb conflict isn't. Like, you can go harder on their insecurities and actually write in consequences for them, without these forced misunderstandings.

I know people might not like this but I will always welcome an imoto chara
If she's cute or just sibling-annoying, that's fine. If she's a blocker who demands FMC to go away or is otherwise entitled, then no.

Now it's on Kaede for not being honest with him.
Exactly. She can't expect him to improve or feel better if she doesn't say anything. It can work if she knows exactly why he feels like he does, but she doesn't. She just knows he somehow struggles.
 
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Man's got plans, but he won't say a word
Yeah this is the unbelievable part. You live together and would communicate about your plans for the day/week. It's being considerate so your partner doesn't make plans that double book you or knows to not make dinner for you. They have plenty of time to talk but the author treats this like a standard romcom where they aren't together literally 24hrs a day.
 
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Yeah this is the unbelievable part. You live together and would communicate about your plans for the day/week. It's being considerate so your partner doesn't make plans that double book you or knows to not make dinner for you. They have plenty of time to talk but the author treats this like a standard romcom where they aren't together literally 24hrs a day.
Damn, that last sentence actually puts it into words perfectly. 100% correct.

you can cut him some slack and go "he is trying“, "he keeps telling himself he will talk soon“ into doing absolutely nothing when put into relation to how many opportunities he has.

He has an almost infinite time with her at home. This drama just doesn‘t work if you think about it for more than a single second.
We are made to believe that he won‘t make an effort to ask why his savior lover is visibly down/out of it for weeks?

Fuck off author, lmao. I can get better snake oil elsewhere
 
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God, i was gonna rate it high cuz it was finally a non pushover mc without perma Drama but here we go again, dumb poorly written Drama and somehow our character all forgot to communicate out of nowhere and its just tilting reading this, what a great turn
 

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