S Rank Boukensha de aru Ore no Musume-tachi wa Juudo no Father Con deshita - Vol. 2 Ch. 7 - I came to the capital.
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I’m assuming all his daughters join his harem right?
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I guess you can say that the MC literally "raised" his harem
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@johnpoop2529 probably because I think they know that he isn't their real parent
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I mean, if it worked for Hikaru Genji. . .
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not even 1 chapter since they left...
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There’s a lot to be said here
1) multiple time skips in this quick succession does NOT make for good story telling. It just makes everything feel disjointed and as if I as a reader was lied to (at first we’re told one story, but get a whole different setting almost immediately). Really if you’re using timeskips this much and this fast then as an author, why not just start in the present you want to tell (him moving to the capital to love with the daughters), and then periodically do flashbacks (if necessary) for further information. What was even the point of their village living if the story isn’t there. Hell, you’re an omnipotent author, why even have your MC move to a village to raise his daughters if both them and he will move back to the capital in less than 10 chapters anyway (I haven’t read the WN/LN, so maybe it was less super rushed there)
2) Another huge problem with those constant time skips is it denies us readers from seeing the main characters grow, overcome challenges, and deal with new situations. I was looking forward to seeing how these fresh from the village girls settled into the capital (especially the lazy), but nope. I mean the swordsman daughter got some great achievements, can I see those happen in real time? Nope. Then why even show them leaving the village?
3) I’m sorry, I just can’t help, but notice. Why exactly is the “Knight Commander” the only one not wearing any armor? Even if she’s very skilled that’s just an unnecessary risk. You’re still on duty AND just fought a wyvern. Wear your protective uniform for crying out loud (I get that we need to show off her breasts, but couldn’t she just take off her armor when they get home? Instead of being a knight that doesn’t wear any armor because safety is for losers?)
4) The cliche upstart, conceited, superficial, elitist, aristocrat bitch that cares way too much about status is such a random way to make him decide wear live. A kinda cool scene, but I mean he also could have stepped in to help the little boy BEFORE the dog got kicked. Apparently just the knight commander showing up would have shifted her attention and he clearly didn’t care about agitating her or any consequences with those last lines.
5) To my knowledge (and I may be wrong as a U.S. Citizen) culturally you g parents don’t normally go live with their children. Maybe older parents who it isn’t safe to live by themselves anymore, and I’m aware of children/new married couples moving in with their parents (usually the husband’s) because of cultural reasons, but I’ve not yet heard of 35 looking man that could still do the work of 10 20 year olds, getting pressured into moving in with his still young (they’d be what 18 here?) daughters.
Overall this is so far just that other S-ranked daughter of the retired adventurer series, but much worse, and just failing on every avenue. The manga has still failed to establish a likable (or just any) character for the main cast (a time skip every 5 seconds really doesn’t help with that). The overall story and plot still feels like nothing (it doesn’t help that the dreams and goals that were talked up in the earlier village arc was just instantly completed), and as a reader this series still hasn’t really done anything to make me attached or interested. I’m kinda just here cuz I’m super bored. And can someone please explain to me again why the father WOULDN’T stay in the village? He’s still fit, has an attachment there, and as a parent should really let his adult girls live their own lives and be independent. Visiting is one thing, but living? I just don’t see the point in any of this (it’d help if any of these characters had a character or reasons for me to fall back for answers).
1) multiple time skips in this quick succession does NOT make for good story telling. It just makes everything feel disjointed and as if I as a reader was lied to (at first we’re told one story, but get a whole different setting almost immediately). Really if you’re using timeskips this much and this fast then as an author, why not just start in the present you want to tell (him moving to the capital to love with the daughters), and then periodically do flashbacks (if necessary) for further information. What was even the point of their village living if the story isn’t there. Hell, you’re an omnipotent author, why even have your MC move to a village to raise his daughters if both them and he will move back to the capital in less than 10 chapters anyway (I haven’t read the WN/LN, so maybe it was less super rushed there)
2) Another huge problem with those constant time skips is it denies us readers from seeing the main characters grow, overcome challenges, and deal with new situations. I was looking forward to seeing how these fresh from the village girls settled into the capital (especially the lazy), but nope. I mean the swordsman daughter got some great achievements, can I see those happen in real time? Nope. Then why even show them leaving the village?
3) I’m sorry, I just can’t help, but notice. Why exactly is the “Knight Commander” the only one not wearing any armor? Even if she’s very skilled that’s just an unnecessary risk. You’re still on duty AND just fought a wyvern. Wear your protective uniform for crying out loud (I get that we need to show off her breasts, but couldn’t she just take off her armor when they get home? Instead of being a knight that doesn’t wear any armor because safety is for losers?)
4) The cliche upstart, conceited, superficial, elitist, aristocrat bitch that cares way too much about status is such a random way to make him decide wear live. A kinda cool scene, but I mean he also could have stepped in to help the little boy BEFORE the dog got kicked. Apparently just the knight commander showing up would have shifted her attention and he clearly didn’t care about agitating her or any consequences with those last lines.
5) To my knowledge (and I may be wrong as a U.S. Citizen) culturally you g parents don’t normally go live with their children. Maybe older parents who it isn’t safe to live by themselves anymore, and I’m aware of children/new married couples moving in with their parents (usually the husband’s) because of cultural reasons, but I’ve not yet heard of 35 looking man that could still do the work of 10 20 year olds, getting pressured into moving in with his still young (they’d be what 18 here?) daughters.
Overall this is so far just that other S-ranked daughter of the retired adventurer series, but much worse, and just failing on every avenue. The manga has still failed to establish a likable (or just any) character for the main cast (a time skip every 5 seconds really doesn’t help with that). The overall story and plot still feels like nothing (it doesn’t help that the dreams and goals that were talked up in the earlier village arc was just instantly completed), and as a reader this series still hasn’t really done anything to make me attached or interested. I’m kinda just here cuz I’m super bored. And can someone please explain to me again why the father WOULDN’T stay in the village? He’s still fit, has an attachment there, and as a parent should really let his adult girls live their own lives and be independent. Visiting is one thing, but living? I just don’t see the point in any of this (it’d help if any of these characters had a character or reasons for me to fall back for answers).
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