S-Rank Party wo Munou da to Tsuihousareta kedo, "Kantei" to "Chiyu Mahou" de Nariagari Musou - Ch. 14

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At least the sister was smart enough to know to attempt to kill the person clearly causing evil solely for his own benefit.
 
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This is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO fucking forced! Goddamn this is bad writing, how the hell did this shit even get published.
Lets just magic up omnipotence for the bad guy and reduce the intelligence level of everyone else so the MC can get into a "crisis".

Why did MCs healing that is known to be busted and OP as fuck not heal her memory spell, because he didn't know it? Then why didn't the knight girl that clearly knows it's a spell tell the healer thats done something nobody has ever done before to try and fix it?
This shit author instead has her storm off to fight the clearly evil guy alone and gets beaten by the clearly impossible bullshit powers that break the rules but it's fine because laws of the world itself takes a backseat to the PLOT.

Also how the fuck long was the knight girl gone? The bad guy had time to not only kidnap the loli but also had plenty of time to mindwipe her.
If mindwiping is so bloody fast and easy how the hell isn't the world completely different than this? Should be huge work camps with mindwiped workers and evil empires fighting wars with piles of mindwiped suicide soldiers all over the place.

Also 90% chance of knight girl fighting MC again after being mindwiped or threatened or whatever the fuck so MC can "win her over" aka put her in debt to MC so author can feel good about turning her into a mindless follower rather than a country dedicated knight (though why shes loyal to the country in the first place with them wanting to kill her sister is a mystery).
 
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Berk horse ain't liking these development, no sirr 🐴neigh
 
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First thanks for the scans but cmon! This story is soooo forced. I can appreciate a smart villain but he is only looks that way since everyone’s common sense is in the dumpster
 
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i call bullshit on her "it was just a test", yea it was totally just a test, you tested him by sending an attack barely anyone should be able to defend against who would normally have killed him and if he had dodged killed many innocents...
 
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I feel not a lick of sadness that she's half dead, endangering the innocent as a "test" I call BS.

Also the writing here is so incredibly forced and retarded this series is a 2/10 for me know. You can't get much worse with this level of forced.
 
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why is it that ks group is consistantly dropping the ball in tl quality on specifically this manga
 
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This is bad writing yes.
Do you think some meager magic could reflect the power of Holy sword?

Come on, what shitty thing, it would be better if he actually have another holy sword user or demonic sword user that could match her under him.
 
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As stupid as this series is, if there is one thing i'm amazed by, is how good the villain are. They are villain because they are evil and they could do evil. No "I'm an established evil guy but my empire went down becuase of those nosy kids who can't keep their hands."

Azel is no villain, he is just an idiot, but Elad on the other hand. You would definitely believe he is a villain with power.
 

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