Man... I'm not a choosing beggar, but your orthography needs to improve a bit more. That, or you should get a PR asap.
Please don't misunderstand, I'm thankful to you for translating this, but I wouldn't donate a single peso to you, no offense intended.
@ALL-SEEING thats the problem with this adaptation, they rushed and left out a lot of details that were present in the novel, thats why reading this feels so random.