Saving 80,000 Gold in Another World for My Retirement - Vol. 6 Ch. 42 - Securing Personnel, Part One

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Thanks alot for the chapter ! I fucking love this manga

A few things i noticed you may want to fix in a v2

page 19 last panel there is a typo on "GENIUS" (GENUIS), also but of this one im not 100% sure, shouldn't it be "YAMANO'S FAMILY VASSALS" instead of "YAMANO FAMILY VASSALS" ? ( maybe someone more proficient in english than me can pitch in 😅 )

page 8 first panel 2nd bubble : the flow for "are of deeply suspect credibility" is a bit odd. Maybe something like "it's natural to think that the credibility of documents, especially from people you don't know, to be untrustworthy"

At any cases thanks for your work !

also cute lolis are justice 😊
 
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@alidan I know; QC is important. I do work with an official group, but because I only picked this series up to learn the skills and get practice, I'm satisfied. QC requires a second person, but that's no longer a "skill". And the offers have been for typesetting or cleaning. I do update any mistakes I or readers find afterward.

@klesh The sentence structure means "Yamano Family Vassals" is correct in this case, because it is the Yamano Family's vassals; it's like splitting the concept of Yamano [Family Vassals] instead of [Yamano Family] Vassals... does that make sense? But thank you for catching that typo on "genius"! I'll wait a bit for any more possible goofs to come in and reupload with the corrected files. <3

@Necrokora This is the actual text put out on the page, so it's announcing when the next part of the series is (was) to be published. I'm translating everything as it is, I promise. <3
 
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@UntappedChaos thanks for your reply and explanation, yeah on this one i was really unsure, thanks for enlightening me :) i also posted an update on something else related to page 8 if you wish to take a look ;)
 
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Do japanese people go EEEEEEEEEH for everything? Annoying AF. Can't watch anything without volume going updown everyday.
 
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Did I just forget the adventurer party in the beginning pages, or were they not given an introduction? Would be weird if MC just hired a random group of people to be her officers.
And why tf didn't she inform herself about the usual wage for officers in this world instead of going off of Japan's standard? Giving (seemingly) extremely high wages is not how you save money.
 
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Thanks for translating, Ren! I think your translation is a lot better than the old group's, too.
 
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don't forget the basic education. she had made scholars' association report as jealousy.
 
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I see, the FUNA story about foreign (other world) trade would be more practical for language learning compared to Potion: the plot-device generator or Average: the j-boomer.

Not that I'm complaining, I like all 3. I just don't think Japanese pop-culture references from the 80s is more practical than social networking.

Potion is getting a bit out of scope in the WN and seems to be spinning its wheels from just solving all her problems with create-anything magic.
 
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@blacker it's the loli virus, bro 😷
@insert_name cute lolis are cute to man and woman, dude, there's no gender limit to think people are cute.
@thock3d I think it's funny, around here in Brasil we go with "QUEEEEEEEEEE", I think Ehhhh sounds funnier as a surprise reaction.

Thanks for the translation !
 
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Kinda like the chapter, it is always great to see no character is leaving behind.
 

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