Sawaranaide Kotesashi-kun - Vol. 5 Ch. 42 - Kouyou-kun's unexpeceted excitement (2)

[MangaDex]

 

[Alexisonfire]

When I saw the last page I never laughed harder in my life, absolute cinema.

 

[Coud31]

Man, these chapters were kinda frustrating cause I'm annoyed at these girls so I looked at the raws. Lol

Spoiler: Spoiler

The redhead girl was actually a double agent basically. She was walking around and seemed to stumble into the two talking about their plans at school and decided to pretend to join so she can save the MC if needed.

 

[HeatManga]

Please, continue! I rather read your TL's than KDT's.

 

[SilentWInd]

Even if she did catch his boner on camera all it would prove is that she's a pervert and that he's a perfectly healthy human male.

 

[Weebshit5149]

How is an adult gonna try to proposition a child with a fucking sex toy and then get the child in trouble.... these are like 14yrolds were dealing with, crazy logic leaps..

 

[Weebshit5149]

When did this nigga get fckn domain expansions 🤣🤣🤣🤣

 

[Seefree21]

Yeah, the VP would have one of those...

 

[can_zero]

Holy... can we wrap up with this arc, the "blackmail evidence" is so stupid and backwards that I dont know how it would work in any court, honestly this evidence just shows a couple of perverted exhibitionist asking to be groped by a young boy

 

[can_zero]

Spoiler: summary of the chapter

 

[Sunji27]

That only massage one part






Thank you for the TL

 

[Asynchria]

"Attack him with a love story"...? is that an accurate translation? Cause that doesn't make any sense at all. Seems like it might be more "girl talk" or "romantic gossip" sorta kinda. So something like this sounds more natural:

I'll win him over with this massager and romantic girl-talk!

(Being a proofreader/editor is literally my day job, so my apologies if this seems a little out of nowhere. I don't intend to be one of those "WELL ACKSHUALLY DESU ITS TRANSLATED WRONG" kind of people, but...yeah, the current English text sounds a little stilted.)

 

[mojo72400]

Page 5 should be "her" instead of "here"

At least Kouyou managed to survive for now by somehow focusing and "powering up"

So VP will get massage & lower his vulnerability by telling him a love story?

 

[nicolas22g]

His excitement for massage was stronger

 

[auriga]

"Attack him with a love story"...? is that an accurate translation? Cause that doesn't make any sense at all. Seems like it might be more "girl talk" or "romantic gossip" sorta kinda. So something like this sounds more natural:

I'll win him over with this massager and romantic girl-talk!

(Being a proofreader/editor is literally my day job, so my apologies if this seems a little out of nowhere. I don't intend to be one of those "WELL ACKSHUALLY DESU ITS TRANSLATED WRONG" kind of people, but...yeah, the current English text sounds a little stilted.)

Can't believe I didn't bat an eye until I read your comment. I took a look at the raws and you're pretty much spot on.

このマッサージ機と恋バナで彼を攻略する！

@KingoRodriguo the particle と is used here so there should be an "and" between massager and girls' talk.

 

[big_red01027]

In one panel it got weirder than Saki. Kudos!

 

[Armp1t]

These girls really need a fk mirror rn

 

[KingoRodriguo]

Page 5 should be "her" instead of "here"

At least Kouyou managed to survive for now by somehow focusing and "powering up"

So VP will get massage & lower his vulnerability by telling him a love story?

It's fixed !

 

[KingoRodriguo]

"Attack him with a love story"...? is that an accurate translation? Cause that doesn't make any sense at all. Seems like it might be more "girl talk" or "romantic gossip" sorta kinda. So something like this sounds more natural:

I'll win him over with this massager and romantic girl-talk!

(Being a proofreader/editor is literally my day job, so my apologies if this seems a little out of nowhere. I don't intend to be one of those "WELL ACKSHUALLY DESU ITS TRANSLATED WRONG" kind of people, but...yeah, the current English text sounds a little stilted.)

I hope you can be this kind of person!

I'm not a native English speaker, and I work on this in the evenings after my job. I know I make mistakes in English regularly, even though I try to fix them before uploading a new chapter

(It’s fixed, by the way.)

 

[Asynchria]

Mistakes are expected Even in the professional manga industry there are a lot of people who have eyes on things to check for mistakes (but even WITH that, sometimes things still slip through...)

You're doing really good considering you're not a native English speaker Thanks for the releases!

EDIT: On the last page, you made another error when fixing the last one Sorry!

Current text: I will him over with this massager*

(you forgot a word in there. She will <something> him over)