Scarlet Star - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - Cute <3 Part 2

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I many guess people never created anything or even tough about creating a story so they think you can only write or draw something that you WANT or whatever stupid thing they might think, like a actor playing a mass murder psychopath does not mean he his a psychopath himself for fuck sake :facepalm:


Anyway welcome to the neet club, you will see it is very easy to adapt to it :dogkek:
 
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ough yeah, I knew what was going to happen when Mars approached that girl, it's not pretty but god is Mars kind of socially inept as a result of years and years of... well the everything.

Well. Getting to be Scarlet Star really is what Mars needed to get out of the hole, but it's no wonder he's still acclimating a little (a lot). Anyway I'm looking forward to see where things go from here as I have been with every chapter.
 
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What's with the content warning?

Wouldn't updating the tags be sufficient?

Those idiots in college sound like the average arrogant Xitheads making statements that aren't worth the oxygen consumed to speak them.
 
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The first mistake would be pandering to the xitter crowd(not accusing you or anything) , they can never be appeased.

Might be a little hopeful outlook, but it's nice that he was being appreciated and saved/healed by his lil sis in the last page
 
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Something that I really appreciate about this the protagonist doesn't immediately become perfect after gaining his powers. It is a slow learning process and it feels so satisfying to see him make small process in each chapter.
 
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The authors to a lot of famous coming-of-age books involving romance are often old men. Most notably to my memory is Philip Pullman, author to His Dark Materials. Honestly, I think that if the public can enjoy the writings of 50-80 year old men about teenage romance. Then honestly your work should be much more palatable.
 

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