Scarlet Star - Vol. 4 Ch. 24.1 - The ScarStar Monkey Incident 2/2

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Denying the shitty trope while doing the shitty trope kinda undermines your intentions
 
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Hopefully Mars finds his way out of tht situation with little to no aftermath😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏
Now the school gonna think he's gay with Sage, pervert, and Scarlet looking weak😭😭😭

Thank you for the chapter and ur hard work on it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏🔥
 
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Another great chapter, poor Mars gonna be gettin bullied for awhile 😥 . Also, either the author or Mars must have a prego fetish. Each time he pictures being with a girl he is jumping straight to putting babies in her XD.
 
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In terms of what you were going for, I see the vision. You’re commenting on the whole clothing malfunction cliché, pointing out the hypocrisy of how women are ogled at, yet men are ridiculed and laughed at for their bodies when put in the same situation. And credit where credit is due, you had the men get undressed as well, not just the women. I see it being an important stepping stone for Mars’ journey, whatever that might be.

It’s a double-edged sword because you do need to show the trope in order to talk about it. It’s not good storytelling to stand on a soapbox and just preach why it’s bad; you need to show why it’s bad.

In terms of execution, I liked seeing Mars’ inner insecurities about Scarlet being caught like that. I think what would have made the chapter better is if we leaned a bit more into that and had the other girls help Scarlet defeat the monkey. It would have shown Mars that women are people too and there’s way more to them than just their looks.

Mars, as Scarlet, has been stripped, almost SA’d, and now has been stripped again. You’ve hammered it in; now it’s time to have Mars see some development, confront his misogynistic mindset head-on.
 
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Thanks for the new chapter, loved it.

I think I understand your thought process behind making this kind of chapter. Some battles are not a battle of physical strength, but rather in the mind as we see here as the monkey itself is not a strong enemy but rather it’s the shame and embarrassment Hino needs to learn how to deal with.

I think you captured the vibe of a school well. with the girls all huddling together, people shaming boys for their size, lemus getting ignored even though he’s trying to do the right thing, everyone pulling their phones out and recording, the double standards between the boys running around naked vs girls, It felt very realistic and vivid.

I do like how you made it where Hino eventually learns to ignore his shame and focus on doing what’s right and defeating the monkey.

Anyways, this was an enjoyable chapter for me. The ending bit with mars and sage hugging while nude is funny.

I do wonder if you have future plans for the crowd recording Scarlet (and Mars) naked. Teenagers are of course well-known for spreading videos and gossip basically immediately. There’s a lot of story and growth potential there
 
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That void had amazing speed, a joke of a special attack, and pathetic HP and defense. Yeah, it makes sense that it died so quickly when it couldn't evade or run any more.
 

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