Secret Order

[MangaDex]

 

[greyhud90]

The start is too weak.
I don't know what this is, who these characters are or even why a grown man is fighting a little girl on sight.

 

[darax]

Not bad but little confusing

 

[Archiver]

A shame they're dropping it. The girl was cute.

 

[Ochredog]

This seems like it has potential, the art is amazing, the writing and pace are good. The only issue is that nothing is explained, not in the summary, nor the first 30 chapters. It's one of those things currently popular among Chinese novels and manhua where the author tries to be mysterious or avoid spoilers by being overly cryptic in the summary. It's like the polar opposite of the Japanese light novel fad where they just stuff the summary into the title of the book. Rather than hoping you'll know what's happening from reading the title like the japs, this book doesn't seem to want you to know what's going on even if you read the book itself. It's feckin' annoying, but... I still think this is good enough to read, especially if the author doesn't keep up with this bs and actually gives us an idea of what this manhua is about within the next 20 chapters, the pacing will still be fine if they can do that. I really hope people start reading this because if nobody follows this no one's gonna want to translate this and I'm never gonna know what's happening here... though I dont know what's going on, I can say one thing, so far the characters are likeable and have depth.