Jumped the shark there at the end in my opinion...Like they should have called the police, or brought a gun to this person's home, shot her. I find it ironic that they have to stand in a specific spot or they won't make it. Also the Death thing being a red herring I don't like, and the ending where they all cut off part of him.
Overall it's a good book and I like MC sacrificing himself, but I don't like most of the rest of it.