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Typos & edit suggestions: @Rythyugn
Typos & edit suggestions: @Rythyugn
- p2 who helds gifts -> who held gifts
- 21 the Gambler and the Merchant -> The Gambler and the Merchant
- p7 going in the meeting room -> going into the meeting room
- p7 my sleeves -> My sleeves
- p9 & p14 & 17 & 31 Erald -> (Since the name in the raws is "Erarudo", maybe this can also be read as "Harold" or "Gerard"?)
- p9 ivy patterned clasp -> ivy-patterned clasp // ivy pattern clasp
- p11 Chloe is certainly a capable girl but -> Chloe is certainly a capable girl, but
- p11 exisstence -> existence
- p13 is that's possible -> if that's possible
- p16 might happen so -> might happen, so
- p19 Miss "Saintess of Great Fortune" -> Miss "Saintess of Great Fortune".
- p21 That's what they started called me. -> That's what they started calling me.
- p21 So that's it you're the rumored -> So that's it. You're the rumored
- p22 saint-ess -> sain-tess
- p22 were invaded with negotiations -> were invaded, with negotiations
- p23 I have no choice but to tell him the truth -> I have no choice but to tell him the truth.
- p23 Yes it is true -> Yes, it is true
- p23 So long as no scams or cheating is involved -> So long as no scams or cheating are involved
- p23 hundred silvers I got was -> hundred silver coins I got were
- p23 through betting on cards you -> through betting on cards, you
- p23 the gift of "great fortune" especially -> the gift of "great fortune", especially
- p24 so they say -> so they said
- p25 ...my sincere apologies -> ...my sincere apologies.
- p25 I am Simply -> I am simply
- p26 twenty five -> twenty-five
- p28 fundament-ally -> fundamen-tally
- p28 not divulge though -> not divulge, though
- p28 In my case if it's -> In my case, if it's
- p28 within a few dozen cards -> limited to a few dozen cards // doesn't exceed a few dozen cards
- p28 which are left where and I -> which are left where, and I
- p29 without a gift I would -> without a gift, I would
- p31 & 32 crystal clear eyes I could -> crystal clear eyes, I could
- p33 pain in the ass opponent -> pain-in-the-ass opponent
- p34 If you don't win there won't -> If you don't win, there won't
- p35 my hobby can make a living -> my hobby can be used to make a living
- p37 but to be with saintess candidates -> but to be among saintess candidates (?)
- p38 comple-tely -> com-pletely // complete-ly
- 40 ...Ah -> ...Ah.
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