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Typos & edit suggestions: @Rythyugn
			
			Typos & edit suggestions: @Rythyugn
- p2 who helds gifts -> who held gifts
 - 21 the Gambler and the Merchant -> The Gambler and the Merchant
 - p7 going in the meeting room -> going into the meeting room
 - p7 my sleeves -> My sleeves
 - p9 & p14 & 17 & 31 Erald -> (Since the name in the raws is "Erarudo", maybe this can also be read as "Harold" or "Gerard"?)
 - p9 ivy patterned clasp -> ivy-patterned clasp // ivy pattern clasp
 - p11 Chloe is certainly a capable girl but -> Chloe is certainly a capable girl, but
 - p11 exisstence -> existence
 - p13 is that's possible -> if that's possible
 - p16 might happen so -> might happen, so
 - p19 Miss "Saintess of Great Fortune" -> Miss "Saintess of Great Fortune".
 - p21 That's what they started called me. -> That's what they started calling me.
 - p21 So that's it you're the rumored -> So that's it. You're the rumored
 - p22 saint-ess -> sain-tess
 - p22 were invaded with negotiations -> were invaded, with negotiations
 - p23 I have no choice but to tell him the truth -> I have no choice but to tell him the truth.
 - p23 Yes it is true -> Yes, it is true
 - p23 So long as no scams or cheating is involved -> So long as no scams or cheating are involved
 - p23 hundred silvers I got was -> hundred silver coins I got were
 - p23 through betting on cards you -> through betting on cards, you
 - p23 the gift of "great fortune" especially -> the gift of "great fortune", especially
 - p24 so they say -> so they said
 - p25 ...my sincere apologies -> ...my sincere apologies.
 - p25 I am Simply -> I am simply
 - p26 twenty five -> twenty-five
 - p28 fundament-ally -> fundamen-tally
 - p28 not divulge though -> not divulge, though
 - p28 In my case if it's -> In my case, if it's
 - p28 within a few dozen cards -> limited to a few dozen cards // doesn't exceed a few dozen cards
 - p28 which are left where and I -> which are left where, and I
 - p29 without a gift I would -> without a gift, I would
 - p31 & 32 crystal clear eyes I could -> crystal clear eyes, I could
 - p33 pain in the ass opponent -> pain-in-the-ass opponent
 - p34 If you don't win there won't -> If you don't win, there won't
 - p35 my hobby can make a living -> my hobby can be used to make a living
 - p37 but to be with saintess candidates -> but to be among saintess candidates (?)
 - p38 comple-tely -> com-pletely // complete-ly
 - 40 ...Ah -> ...Ah.
 
			
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