"Dine" was a reference to "Ondine". Where does "Dianne" come from?
Why change "Ryah" to "Dolly"?
And changing "Yale" to "Towl" is especially strange, since the MC spent time thinking of meaningful names for his little spirits according to their specialities. Maybe "Yale" wasn't a perfect transcription, but "Towl" doesn't seem closer to the intented meaning of "rich soil".
