SERAPHINA, GOD DAMN IT.
It's not her, actually... it just really, seriously, pisses me off; the plan specifically was to:
"Hit with everything you've got, first shot, and dont let up"
That's a simple plan, and NOBODY should be able to say that stupid "Oh, I guess I'll get serious" bullshit line after understanding the assignment; if you weren't serious, that's a problem!
Follow the fucking directions, lady!
I think I'm more irritated that Seraphina said it, cos she's super cool (and a total self-insert).
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Also, what a great fucking chapter! Holy cows!
Really hoping this story just keeps being as good as it has been; it’s awesome.