Senpai ga Boku wo Torinikiteru - Vol. 2 Ch. 20 - Test and rehearsal

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The same group is doing these translations but this chapter wildly differs in quality from the previous ones. What's up?
 
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Not gonna lie, this translation is super rough.

Pg1: first bubble, spanish style question mark.
 
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This was pretty funny lol. I say she is probably going to save the 4 metre result as that could come in useful later lol.

Thanks for translating the chapter.
 
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hmm the maid is a trap?? well i mean the maid does have a "boyish" face but i could be wrong
 
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Pronouns sort of all over the place, and a few other bungles, but still mostly intelligible. Thanks for the TL!
 
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Need a better proofreader for this, this chapter felt like a mess. Grammar is wrong on so many pages, even as early as page 1. Page 5: his>her head.

Really, fire the proofreader, he sucks at his job.
 
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I think you got the pronouns confused a few times.

Also, jesus christ poor bodyguards
 
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Her hands on her breast doesn't make sense either -> His hands on her breasts doesn't come naturally either

You had to put this idea in his head -> You had to put this idea in her head
 

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