@Retarded_Wizard same thing happened with D-frag, we got a crap translation then a group stepped up to make a readable translation, that's why we should never belittle someone's work, no matter how bad it is
Maybe, just maybe, have some awareness and notice that there are two proper translation uploaded already and this might be redundant and unnecessary because this isn't even a translation but a cleanup on the lousy (but good effort) translation?