she is beautiful - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - beautiful knowing

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Why the 3 yrs gap?
Why can't the other 3 'profession' be 'inseminated' and there must be a separate class for that 'job'?
Why even got a 'labor' class when supposedly no1 want to be in it?
Why u cant do weather effect in geo dome?
Why let them know there's an 'outside' at all?
Why dispose of rat corpse in share trash bin?
Why u no use the capsule for knowledge transfer?
 
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Why the 3 yrs gap?
Why can't the other 3 'profession' be 'inseminated' and there must be a separate class for that 'job'?
Why even got a 'labor' class when supposedly no1 want to be in it?
Why u cant do weather effect in geo dome?
Why let them know there's an 'outside' at all?
Why dispose of rat corpse in share trash bin?
Why u no use the capsule for knowledge transfer?
Author spent 2mins thinking of the actual world building and the rest of the time thinking about girls love
 
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Why can't the other 3 'profession' be 'inseminated' and there must be a separate class for that 'job'?
Why even got a 'labor' class when supposedly no1 want to be in it?
Why let them know there's an 'outside' at all?

From this one chapter this Familie place seems like a similar planned society to the one described in Aldous Huxley's Brave New World, though in BNW pregnancy has been completely eliminated. Either way the people in charge want to control who reproduces because they believe in eugenics. They want to pass down leadership roles to people with 'good' genes, while people with 'bad' genes must take care of menial labor. The outside filled with 'savages' is also a tool of control, and most citizens prefer to stay in the safe 'civilized' part of the world. Some weirdos are curious about it just like Kurumi, but there's not enough of them to cause problems.

Your other questions are more specific to this story; I can only assume they will be answered in time.
 
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The childhood portion of this chapter had me really rooting for Sayaka, but the end really feels like a setup for her to be the villain :notlikethis:
  1. The first character the MC meets in a psychological story with this plot basically has to be concealing information for the plot to work
  2. Sayaka seemed to be jealous of Kurumi and Hikari's relationship
  3. her mastery of nano-technology and medicine seems really conspicuous unless she played some part in Kurumi's current condition, intentional or otherwise.
I really hope Sayaka can be more of a tragic sympathetic character than an outright antagonist, but I guess I'll see.
 

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