She May Not Be Cute - Ch. 13 - Burning Flames

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Good chapter. I especially like the parallelism between his burning temperature and her scar being caused due to a fire, and how they interact in this chapter. He's physically cold and he's emotionally cold and so the juxtaposition between the fire and the cold of the personality creates a good contrast that emotionally conveys both their mental states at the time.
 
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So he scarred her face, marring her beauty (well, theoretically) and making it harder for her to attract suitors. He'll just have to take responsibility and marry her.
 
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@Tamerlane that was kind of deep, but nice analysis! My smol brain would have never come up with an analysis like that! 🤩
 

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