Sherbet Above the Sea of Fog - Ch. 6 - Love Trap

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Anyone else starting to think they both deserve to be there and you're not particularly bothered if they make it out or not?

So far their characters are just dumb and horny, and needlessly angry. Hoping they develop soon.
Whenever I lose hope in the initial hook that's supposed to grab an audience, I end up feeling underwhelmed if I continue. If you're near that point, don't regret spending more time on this.

It's true the main draw of this hook is conflicts around Sherbet's mental language barrier. I mean her untrustworthy thought process including her thirst, not that she's Bavarian. The characters are much more than that, but they're not going to stop being "dumb", horny, and angry when those are prominent traits.
 
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Sherbert: "But..."
Granita: "But nothing."
Sherbert: thinking carefully . . . definitely not nothing, though I'll have to try harder next time to confirm that - maybe untie her belt before setting off the trap . . .
 
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Thank you for the translation (we'll see Granita's bare booty eventually. I can feel it).
 

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