Shigoto Kaeri, Dokushin no Bijin Joushi ni Tanomarete - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

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Thank you kindly for picking this up, by the way there at page 20 there is blurry text on the top right.
 
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Oh man if only there was a way for us READers to know on what happened THIS CHAPTER. Perhaps the author should explain to us using WORDS. Preferably using an easy to digest format, like a MANGA.
chill my dude ofc I know what's happening I just dont like how the author keeps blue balling the mc
 
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chill my dude ofc I know what's happening I just dont like how the author keeps blue balling the mc
Well it is an actual story with plot and narrative tension, not simple hentai. So.

Also what do you mean "keeps blue balling", they've banged more than once already.
 
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Going forward you might want to have another person proofread the chapter as well. There's a lot of grammatical errors throughout the chapter, as well as missing letters or using the wrong tense for the inflection.

It's competent enough you can sus out what everyone is saying but it doesn't make for a pleasant reading experience overall.
 
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Well it is an actual story with plot and narrative tension, not simple hentai. So.

Also what do you mean "keeps blue balling", they've banged more than once already.
nobody coparing this with a "simple hentai" and I can name some that has an actual story with plot and narrative tension. What I mean by blue balling is the mc character development. We all know about his inferiority complex since day 1 but somehow it persist or even got worse. Y'know it feels like we're getting negative progression which is frustrating kek.
 

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