Shihai Shoujo Kubaru-chan - Ch. 29 - Target Acquired

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This author sucks ass at writing lol. He goes to buy eggs, isn't even gone for 2 minutes and the girls catch back up to him? Why'd they even send him alone if they were going to be that quick? And then this lady wraps a wire around her neck like 5 times in one bump?

I want to like this because the plots interesting but its just such bad writing. Dudes surviving jumping off a roof with zero pain afterwards, driving a car off a cliff at full speed just to walk away fine... the suspension of disbelief is completely gone.
 
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I know how to play as joker after reading this story (nonstop 😂😂🤣)
 
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I mean what is he suppose to do? He lives in her home, and has no money for his own place and he not going back to his dad.
Not even avoid the Yandere? I don't know, I feel like they needed to straighten things out like he did when she wanted to him to kiss her.
 

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You would think the tall lady was just an awkward person if not for the whole basically being a serial killer thing.
 

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