Shimotsuki-san wa Mobu ga Suki ~Hitomishiri na Kanojo wa Ore ni Dake Dere Amai~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Handsome MC (but "basic" compared to a guy in class that have 3 girls spreading their cheeks for him) finds the "princess", "goddess" or whatever term you would like to use sleeping in class after class since he forgot something, accidentally wakes her up and apologizes, then she talks to him (she is too nervous to talk to anyone else), and asks to be friends (she isn't nervous talking to him because plot, maybe they give an explenation, idk, I have only read chapter 1). I'm guessing she immediately gets closer to him (both physically and mentally or whatever the term is) than what friends are (because she is anti-social probably), and the 3 other girls possibly get jelous and wants the MC, or the pretty boy gets mad and shows his ugly side, or both things happen. Anyways it's not terrible, but it's only chapter 1.

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They really went batshit crazy with this. In just chapter 2 they already introduced some bullshit. Apparently she can hear sounds others can't hear, including FEELINGS!? WHAT THE ****. That is some immense bullshit. Can't get more plot armor than that unless you are literally making a story that doesn't make sense in the sense (badum tss) that it's just things that happen, for example if the main character in a fantasy/adventure manga suddenly used a skill that was never revealed, against an enemy, with no explenation, and then never uses it again, and the skill itself and what it does doesn't make sense.

Anyways, this is garbage.
 
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They really went batshit crazy with this. In just chapter 2 they already introduced some bullshit. Apparently she can hear sounds others can't hear, including FEELINGS!? WHAT THE ****. That is some immense bullshit. Can't get more plot armor than that unless you are literally making a story that doesn't make sense in the sense (badum tss) that it's just things that happen, for example if the main character in a fantasy/adventure manga suddenly used a skill that was never revealed, against an enemy, with no explenation, and then never uses it again, and the skill itself and what it does doesn't make sense.

Anyways, this is garbage.
Also in an attempt to sway tropes they have the MC be a mob character and the antagonist is the Harem MC type character. Except that's already a trope too, it feels very sufferage porn when you have an MC whom everyone around him was like "I'm yeeting you out of my life to persue a Ikeman that isn't showing any interest in me". Like it's all so on the nose to create a bubble around the MC so he's lonely and we can have drama with all these characters later.

I'm predicting for sure that later on we'll have all the other girls 1 by 1 realise the Ikeman isn't worth their time or that he'll never want them and they'll try to get chummy with MC afterwards as if nothing ever happened.
 
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Titular girl appears to be of the quiet Dandere archetype. That's... not so common. She's definitely not an ice queen, so not a Kuudere. Shimotsuki is the childhood friend of the other guy, you say? Say no more, this girl is 100% the losing heroine of the other guy's harem.

Rather than a mob, to me the actual MC seems more like he's a formerly dense, washed-up middle school harem MC, whose harem lost interest and jumped ship upon stepping into high school.

So he tries to run away after merely brushing the titular girl's hair with his hand... that's not a good sign.
 
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Titular girl appears to be of the quiet Dandere archetype. That's... not so common. She's definitely not an ice queen, so not a Kuudere. Wait, Shimotsuki is a childhood friend of the other guy, you say? Say no more, this girl is 100% the losing heroine of the other guy's harem.

Rather than a mob, to me the actual MC seems more like he's a formerly dense, washed-up middle school harem MC, whose harem lost interest and jumped ship upon stepping into high school.

So he tries to run away after merely brushing the titular girl's hair with his hand... that's not a good sign.
I like this take but I'd say he is indeed a Mob as everything about him is average and that fits the Mob character point specially as he's not the MC of the class as he calls it.
 
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Pussy MC... Runs away not trying to clear misunderstanding...

Also has some sort of "I wanna be the main character" syndrome which is usually funny but in this case just feels narcissistic as fuck...

I'm prob looking into it too much, but pussy MC still stands
 
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They really went batshit crazy with this. In just chapter 2 they already introduced some bullshit. Apparently she can hear sounds others can't hear, including FEELINGS!? WHAT THE ****. That is some immense bullshit. Can't get more plot armor than that unless you are literally making a story that doesn't make sense in the sense (badum tss) that it's just things that happen, for example if the main character in a fantasy/adventure manga suddenly used a skill that was never revealed, against an enemy, with no explenation, and then never uses it again, and the skill itself and what it does doesn't make sense.

Anyways, this is garbage.
It's called "synesthesia", and while it is pretty rare, it's very real, not some bs. calm down man.
 
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It's called "synesthesia", and while it is pretty rare, it's very real, not some bs. calm down man.
Synesthesia is when you experience one sense through another, like being able to see sounds as color in your field of vision, etc. It doesn't give you any new senses that other people don't have, like being able to see people's personality auras or feelings. That is absolutely not even remotely close to real.
 
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Bro people need to calm the hell down. What's with this slander on a story at chapter 1?

First of all Synesthesia is a real condition and no, it's not exclusive to colors like somebody up there said. There are many kinds of synesthesia so it is a plausible thing tbh. Also this is a work of fiction. Imagine go calling something trash just because it's outside the norm in a work of fiction. The story is good and entertaining. It's not even flawed to begin with. I swear to god some of these mfs just want some attention and they don't really care about romcom or whatever.
 
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Pussy MC... Runs away not trying to clear misunderstanding...

Also has some sort of "I wanna be the main character" syndrome which is usually funny but in this case just feels narcissistic as fuck...

I'm prob looking into it too much, but pussy MC still stands
I read the web novel and couple of volumes of the LN and let me tell you he is not a pussy MC. You will see.
 
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lmao mc is a salty they don't love him like ugh come up with better story
 

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