Shinen no Majutsushi ~Hangyakusha to shite Yuuheisareta Ore wa Fushi no Karada to Saikyou no Chikara wo Teniire Boukensha to shite Nariagaru~ - Vol. …

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So far, the pacing is fast but it is going nowhere yet.

I really thought the 1 year he is imprisoned turns out to be years later and he can start new. Nope, it is exactly 1 year, making the jailed arc seems stupid. They could just say he is 100 years old and being strong because he has immortal skill and it wont change the story.

Get out of jail and still using the same fucking name like he intent to bait both countries to war.

Get S-Rank recognitions but no S-Rank missions while dragons are everywhere.

Got a cat girl slave which was a former princess (of fucking course) for dirt cheap.

Next, he probably gonna topple his old country, resolve his slave's trauma, add the female knight and current country's princess into his harem.

This makes SAO looks like fucking Lord of the Rings. Everything is safe, nothing raises eyebrows even a bit.

However, the translation is top tier, I wish TLs taking better project with their skill.
i agree with everything, but sao is great in part 1 gun gale wasnt that great and part 2 of season one wasnt either. alicization was INSANE and how the rest of the story should have been
 
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This was some S tier trash. I think what irked me the most, aside from the slavery, the pointless adventurer status, the cliche "you're fired" opening, and the typical power fantasy protagonist...WAS HOW MANY PEOPLE THE AUTHOR DREW WITH THEIR EYES CLOSED AS PART OF THEIR CHARACTER DESIGN. FUCKING COME UP WITH SOMEONE ELSE. THEY ALL BLURRED TOGETHER.
 
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This series is so stupid, I don't know why I bothered reading all those chapters.
The bandit chief with the glasses is surprised that they can see them because of the clearing barrier... But like what would you do if you were just invisible? The carriage would just go by, or the horses would walk over your weaklings :slap:
"The town guards will probably catch him" but how would they know he's a criminal, since he likely comes and goes out of town usually, and you aren't going after them or saying anything about it? :slap:
"Just what the hell were they doing in a place like this?" Well, they were blocking the road... Like, if they were trying to be sneaky, they would likely let the carriage pass by, they were specifically blocking the road... Do you know who blocks roads in the middle of the night? Yeah, that's right, bandits. :slap:
And that couple of definitely not suspicious people with skulls on their clothes were just able to cross the border, and they just had a friendly chat with the butler, letting MC know that they're after him? Yeah, super realistic...
The last part is the best one for me. Cloaked guys WITH SKULLS ON THEIR CLOTHES
Hmmmm
yea totally normal
let them see the dude we just found out is the disciple of our beloved hero xD
 
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This manga is extremely cliché, boring, lacks any kind of creativity and is fast paced AF, like if the author already knows that his creation is going to be cut short soon....
 
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Get S-Rank recognitions but no S-Rank missions while dragons are everywhere.
What do you mean "no S-Rank missions"? MC just got a mission, assigned personally by the King, to go and fight something that the whole kingdom's army did not manage to defeat.
That's totally what S-rank missions should be. Not just hunting flying lizards for sport.
 
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What do you mean "no S-Rank missions"? MC just got a mission, assigned personally by the King, to go and fight something that the whole kingdom's army did not manage to defeat.
That's totally what S-rank missions should be. Not just hunting flying lizards for sport.
Go read back chapter 4, the guild told him there no S-Rank mission.

Everytime he fights, it always involving dragons. That slave got a dragon curse on her too.

That damn country continent is infested with dragons. Might as well make a quest gather intel/solving these dragon attacks as a plot point.

The King request helps from him, it is not a guild quest/mission.

Why do you want to argue about on the blandest manga?
 
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i agree with everything, but sao is great in part 1 gun gale wasnt that great and part 2 of season one wasnt either. alicization was INSANE and how the rest of the story should have been
Yeah, overall I don't hold SAO in high regard, just typical power/harem fantasy but at the bare minimum it has better storyline than this manga.
 
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Yeah, overall I don't hold SAO in high regard, just typical power/harem fantasy but at the bare minimum it has better storyline than this manga.
very true. if you like power fantasy with some dark/dystopian elements sao is perfect if you can ignore some crap story beats. as a teen who just started anime it was absolutely god tier and still holds a nostalgic place in my heart
 
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I like to turn off my brain and read this but if I think at all the plot holes just go on and on and on and on...
 
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...the town guards will probably catch him
MC is recognized by his former nation as so powerful he could destroy the nation all by himself, and even he couldn't detect the guy when he vanished but the town guards who get routinely beaten by much weaker opponents will catch him?

Stop being so aggressively stupid, MC. It's really starting to hurt.
 
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Neat and short read so far.
Thanks for the TL, looking forward to more chapters :D
 
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I don't know why some of you guys are thinking these guys are bandits - there's nothing to suggest that these are the same guys from chapter 2 (especially since that was a group of 6 and this group only has 5 people). This just looks like some other sorta shadowy adventuring group or something.

"I may be a magician, but if you think I can't do hand-to-hand combat, you're terribly mistaken!"
Then why did you buy the catgirl slave and make her your vanguard? You're immortal, physically strong and magically the strongest. What good does having a teammate even do for you?
 
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This is the first time I read a manga so horrible-ly "flat" that it doesn't make me swear like a sailor, but instead, it makes me feel...
bland. Nothing.

The tropes are lined to be consumed without 'spice', the drawings don't help either because it lacks variety.
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After reading this volume, I think I'm capable of making my own manga too. Not like you can make something even more generic and trashy than this.
 

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