Glad you're doing OK TL. Was just thinking about these silly little trifles the other day and how it's been a while since I'd seen one. Happy to have another one to down in my lunch break
Story is...fine, artwork is acceptable. I like the FMC and not just because she's the only actual character in the story. One of these days it'd be nice to have a merchant BBEG who's evil entirely on his own, and not because he's part of a corrupt family 🤷
This one isn't bad in concept. I appreciate the sister ends up with a big muscle man instead of the usual bishie. Also that they aren't vaguely nobility.
It suffers from the usual "too many serialization long relationships and developments summarized into 4 pages" but that's a lot of oneshots in these anthologies. There are only so many stories explicitly written to be oneshots I guess. I would read a full serialization for a while if it existed though
Minor correction on page 8: "suicide" is a noun, not a verb. Thus, it should be "…forced into a double suicide." It's gratifying to see a work not romanticizing a true yandere.
Thanks for translation and hope you're recovering well. Anyways I like how this one have an accurate/true yandere and a decent plot that can be serialized. I deff want to see the love blossom between Claire and Ray and Lucy and Godfrey.
This was really fast paced but it works with how they manage to show time passing
Im just confused on Hector as a yandere… was he always into claire and thats why he did double suicide with the sis or is it bc of claire’s actions changing that made him interested in her this timeline