This translation is not 100% accurate because I don't speak English very well, if there is a wrong translation, please correct it and I will edit it. I did everything by myself, so please help
This translation is not 100% accurate because I don't speak English very well, if there is a wrong translation, please correct it and I will edit it. I did everything by myself, so please help
Gonna be honest here, if this is the best English you can put out, you're better off spending your time studying English instead of attempting to translate things to English.
EDIT: And it's also been pointed out elsewhere that you messed up the translations of the names despite there being furigana on the raws, which provide an unambiguous reading of their names. If you do not have sufficient command of either Japanese or English, being a JP>EN translator is not a good idea.